It looks interesting. I don't want to criticise, but one thing you might want to think about is the different sized territories near the edges.
It's not a requirement, just in the guidelines:https://www.warlight.net/wiki/Map_guidelines
As an example, Carrodunum and Tanais are only actually 3 moves apart, even though they have a lot of space between.
I like the way you've made the cities, I can see where you've made the "house" shapes black outlined for them, maybe putting a thicker border or something might help draw the eye to them when glancing over the map?
In regards to the troop numbers, perhaps Fizzer was thinking along the lines of 3 and 4 digit numbers? I think generally he's not a fan of small territories. You could perhaps increase the width and height of the SVG file? That might help without making any major changes, just a suggestion, please don't bite my head off! :)