1. I hate this style of map, Just like I didn't like https://www.warlight.net/Map/13912-Rise-Fall-Roman-Empire
(I don't know why you've taken on this style, your usual one looks and plays much better)
2. The Awkward Tilt of the map is horrendous, I know you're trying to keep the original style, but it just looks odd.
3. Why is Nineveh a major city? Certainly there were more important cities than that.
On the other hand, it looks very promising, and all your maps are excellent, so I must expect as much from this one.
Edited 6/7/2015 23:28:31