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Add to the Story: 12/7/2014 09:24:04


The Mad Japanese
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Once upon a Time, there were two Nations. One was a Republic who believed in Peace,Equality and Unity on the other was a Kingdom, prosperous, militaristic and was ruled by a Cruel Man who has enslaved the Populace. But as Time passes, Peace comes closer to the edge of Collapse
Add to the Story: 12/7/2014 10:29:22


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Ah, I see. Sort of like a paraggraph version of the question is. They used to make films for fun with that technique in Soviet Union.


King CroIvan tried to be fair, he really did. But his nationalist-ness made him blind to everything except the bettering of Hrvat-land. Unfortunately, people like him could be great, but are too blinded by nationalism to be great.

King Strećko was a fair man. He enjoyed making large, detalied maps that were rated highly amongst the monarchy. Though Srećko's belief in peace did not always hold, it was good enough.
Add to the Story: 12/8/2014 20:11:44


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I like this sort of thing, but I'm not very creative. Giving it a little bump now so that others may see it and continue it for me.
Add to the Story: 12/8/2014 21:52:43


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One day as king streako was wandering through his gardens, there was a blinding flash of light and a container of massive proportions and an oddly blue color suddenly appeared where it had not formerly been. He had not much time to ponder as a hatch-like panel opened in the side and a man rushed out. When the man saw the king, he immediately approached and said, "My name is John Smith and I need to find the doctor urgently. Do you know where he is???"
Add to the Story: 12/8/2014 23:34:40

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The king replied with "no, I don't", so John Smith just walked off. John Smith crossed the road but was hit by a speeding car and was killed instantly.
Add to the Story: 12/9/2014 03:02:32


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King Strećko was polite to all, and would be polite to the mysterious man, but luckily, our great god, the author, decided to kill him off quickly.

In addition, King CroIvan noticed this incident and wished to stop this from happening again. So, he programmed an Earth computer where it was impossible for anything to materialise, teleport, and especially for odd little men to appear.

And time continued.

(Let's try to make this story acceptable)
Add to the Story: 12/9/2014 03:46:18


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but a Darkness rises as the Last Shimmer of Light from the 5th Age of Man. On the 1st Sunrise of the 6th Age of Man. A Tremble wakes up both Kingdoms, King Strecko and King Croivan pondered to what could have caused this. Then, the Huldian Peak suddenly exploded with Ash and Fire raining down the Two Kingdoms
Add to the Story: 12/9/2014 05:00:30


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Making the two Yugoslavs indistinguishable, and the monarchies in chaos. Everything was equal, and everything was restarted.
Add to the Story: 12/9/2014 11:12:31

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After the restart, King CroIvan decided he was bored, so he ordered his army to do lots of silly marches. This just made him even more bored, so he decided to commit suicide.
Add to the Story: 12/9/2014 14:34:40


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King Crolvan's son took power. Prince Mennovai's only goal was the complete and calculated slaughter and enslavement of Strecko's kingdom.

So, he he sent one of his larger companies to attack strecko and probe for where his defenses are. After heavy casualties, the men reported back.
Add to the Story: 12/9/2014 16:55:41

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They reported that the best way to defeat Strecko's kingdom was to wait for Strecko to die because Strecko was really old and was near death anyway. Once Strecko had died of old age, his kingdom would be easy to take as there was no obvious heir to the thrown. Prince Mennovai went away to think about the plan and decide if he was to implement it or not.

Edited 12/9/2014 16:55:59
Add to the Story: 12/9/2014 20:26:51


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But Strecko realised the threat to his lands, as well as his oldness, considering that the monarch had already reached the ripe age of 102. So after hearing of the attack by Hrvat-land, he decided to change the successive laws of his realm, so that the strongest vassal would take the throne instead of his weak great-great-grandson who was 12. This aggravated the little boy so greatly that he had to be grounded for a week, while the vassals grew in loyalty. Especially the Duke of Angvur, who was a very capable strategist and the new apparent heir.
Add to the Story: 12/9/2014 22:52:21


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After the great-great-grandson, named Prince Ubica, grew to the age of 18, he left home. King Strecko was on his death bed, at the age of 108, and the Duke of Angvur was ready to take his place. However, Prince Ubica wanted the throne. He assassinated the Duke of Angvur with his bare hands. The boy had finally lived up to his name.(you can translate ubica to Croatian if you want) With his work done, Ubica became first in line for the throne.
Add to the Story: 12/9/2014 23:42:51

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However, he was then killed immediately.
Add to the Story: 12/10/2014 00:07:50


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General Aurexus then rose to power, becoming the de facto ruler of the entire kingdom. With an unmatched strategic prowess, he was the finest commander in the land.


He ordered a 40,000 man draft across the kingdom and its vassals. Each family would relinquish either the father, the firstborn son or another son in order of priority.

This caused much unrest, and only 5,000 men were recruited. He dubbed them " Aralakh Legion " and set them to battle with Mennovai's army, which was stationed not far from " Rex " 's palace grandee.
Add to the Story: 12/10/2014 01:20:23

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Aurexus discovered that in his kingdom, there were underground groups that were plotting to overthrow him. He also found that they would speak in an unspeakable language. In a fit of anger, he banned the use of any tongues other than Sivletsky,a slavic language and his mother tongue. Because much of the population had no knowledge of Sivletsky, many men were killed and wives were raped and murdered. Children as young as 4 years old were abused and forced to enlist as child soldiers sending the recruits up to 12,000 people.
Add to the Story: 12/10/2014 08:34:37


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But one man named Thexes rebelled against Aurexus. He united many Groups against him and by Autumn, they sieged the Capital. Looting and Plundering like Barbarians. By the Middle of Winter, they have taken the Capital and Aurexus has fled to the Khaffar Peaks. Upon rising to the Throne, Thexes went to the Far Mountains of the East where the Great Dragon of Time rests
Add to the Story: 12/10/2014 09:30:06

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And the dragon killed him.
Add to the Story: 12/10/2014 10:46:43

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but then he came back to life
Add to the Story: 12/10/2014 14:03:51

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and died again.
Add to the Story: 12/10/2014 14:24:40

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and he came back to life even once more. Although now no one knew which one he really was, the first one to die, the first one to come back to life and the second oen to die, or the second one to come back to life.
Add to the Story: 12/10/2014 22:49:50


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King Thexes received a dire report from the Aralakh Regiment fighting Prince Mennovai.
Add to the Story: 12/11/2014 01:36:07


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He told him "im sure that I could be a move star if I could get out of this place..."

Edited 12/11/2014 01:36:15
Add to the Story: 12/11/2014 04:14:59


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(Way to be an overkill)
Add to the Story: 12/11/2014 04:17:24


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just skip him, lol
Add to the Story: 12/11/2014 14:37:45


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( next person ; start where I left off )
Add to the Story: 12/11/2014 17:51:32

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The End.
Add to the Story: 12/11/2014 21:04:18


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(nobody went off of my Billy Joel lyric)
Add to the Story: 12/11/2014 21:23:33

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The Aralakh Regiment had been slaughtered with only 5 men left alive. The Prince's army was rapidly advancing. Soon they were at the capital, Kalassos, gates. The Capital was seemingly empty when they had came, but as soon as the war trumpet blew, hundreds, thousands, millions of men charged at the army. The casualties were tremendous, but in the end...
Add to the Story: 12/12/2014 03:10:31


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The line held.

Prince Mennovai had to recall every standing soldier to his lines. King Thexes had held fast and won out in the end. But the casualties were through the roof. Almost the entire kingdom and its vassals were depopulated. Few had the capacity to work. Those who did were needed for military service. Thexes called upon what few commanders he still had to commence a gathering.

" My great leaders... " Thexes said. Before him stood the 4 remaining marshals of his armies : King Juel ( Jew-ell ), a master of surprise tactics ; Lord Montgomery, a man of expert analysis comprehension skills ; General Kampf, the last remaining true military officer who could operate any battlefield like a chessboard ; and Mark Victor, the most renowned blacksmith in the land. He often capitalized on the superior equipment that they had at their disposal to create elite companies of troops.

" ... We are gathered to take the fight to Mennovai's Heartland. We've lost our mothers. We've lost our sons. We've lost our brothers. We've lost our fathers. We've lost our cousins. And most importantly of all : we've lost our fervor. But here we stand, ready to take the fight to them, and bring peace and liberty to the entire world once and for all. "

Juel was quick to object : " My lord, King Thexes, this is an outrage! We have just lost at least 80% of our population! How can we fight a war in this condition!? In fact, how can we do ANYTHING? I say we entrench ourselves for Mennovai's next assault, and use some scorched earth to lure him where we want him ; then, pounce on him when he least expects us! "

Kampf despised this. " No, Juel. We have lost too much as you have said, but we cannot abandon our land for some risky military stratagem. We take the fight to Mennovai. It is our only option. We might not have the numbers, but Victor here can reinforce what's left of our true army corps. "

Victor agreed. " I am with Kampf on this one. We'll use our army corps as our primary assault force. We'll gather up our remaining civilians and speedily train them into militias. Then, we shall send them out as a diversion while our primary corps advance and invade Mennovai's lands. "

Montgomery thought otherwise. " Prince Mennovai is poorly tempered and is reckless. Juel's plan would be much more successful in the end, and it offers a better chance of success than straightforward assault. It's also possible Mennovai is already entrenching, and planning to wait out the coming Winter months. "

Juel liked this idea, but, after hearing Kampf and Victor, thought up a new possibility : " We could ambush them during the Winter! Think of it, everybody wins ; you 2 get your straightforward assault, I get my ambush and surprise tactic, and Montgomery should already be capable of analyzing this as a perfect plan! "

Montgomery was quick to snap " Are you crazy!? The militias don't have the equipment to survive wintertime warfare, and our army corps are already so badly beaten! No, we can't do that.

Kampf decided to back up Juel " Hmmm, yes. Juel has a point. And, Montgomery, we could easily divert primary resources to - "

Eventually, Thexes stopped listening. Hearing his remaining generals bicker gave him a glimpse of what his Kingdom's bleak future was going to look like. He remembered the past, when things were well. His preceding King, Aurexus, would've solved this war problem long before it became a problem. He reminisced about the old world as a whole, really; back when Hrvat-land was controlled by King Strecko. How his Kingdom's views had changed since then, it was marvelous. They were once terrible monarchs, now they were fighting for justice and liberty against Prince Mennovai's tyrannical rule of Marklel-land. This thought brought him to another; these strange lines of succession. Before King Croivan, there was only the Marklel-land Republican Government. Then Croivan, a farmer, rises to power? Strange. And his spoiled son, Mennovai, then becomes the ruler. And back when Strecko was in power? He would have never guessed that his little brat named Prince Ubica would take the reins of leadership, and then a poor man named Aurexus would become the finest commander in Hrvat-land and would take his own place. Thexes had 2 powerful names to live up to. It was great pressure indeed. It was unfortunate it had to draw out this long. The last few fights would be terrible, but their is no price tag for liberty. At all costs, they had to win. He took a deep breath, and using the evidence and testimonies all Marshals brought up, he made a decision.

Edited 12/12/2014 03:22:31
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