https://www.warzone.com/SinglePlayer?PreviewMap=72278

This is a new map I have under development. Could someone give me a few suggestions?

the mountains in the center of the islands looks bad,but the resst,the map is interesting

Looks great so far!

Here are a couple of suggestions:
- Choose a different color for your name in the bottom left. It's hard to read.
- Try to get the numbers in the bonuses more in the middle
- there is a lot of sea in your map. Perhaps move your legenda to the mid left

the mountains in the center of the islands looks bad

Describe how they could be improved.

Thanks for the replies!

- Choose a different color for your name in the bottom left. It's hard to read.
What color would you suggest? Black? White? Gray?

- Try to get the numbers in the bonuses more in the middle
I have been trying to fix this, do you know how?

the mountains in the center of the islands looks bad
As DanWL said, please tell me how I could make them better!

Edited 3/4/2018 21:42:44

Could use bigger island chains and some bigger lakes. Rivers would look nice too. Maybe even add desert cacti or trees for decoration.

- Try to get the numbers in the bonuses more in the middle

I have been trying to fix this, do you know how?

Since you can't set center points for bonuses, you have to change the bonus. Either the shape itself or add a new shape. Basically, you make a second box/shape that is made in a color that hides it then make them part of the same bonus. In this way you can 'move' the center point.

Seeing your map through, I would try to scale up the 'bonus map' first, since that is simpler and you have space. Also, never done ^ that myself, so my description is a bit sub-par.

Could use bigger island chains and some bigger lakes. Rivers would look nice too. Maybe even add desert cacti or trees for decoration.
Not sure I could do river but I will work on making the lakes stretch out farther. For the islands, would you suggest around, Stanswestia and Dapelle? or should i make a new one on the eastern side?

No, I mean island chains that are around 1 territory each, like Hawaii or Frisia is to real life. Vary in how big your islands are, and even make some in the middle of the ocean.

No, I mean island chains that are around 1 territory each, like Hawaii or Frisia is to real life. Vary in how big your islands are, and even make some in the middle of the ocean.

I will try to add something like that

stop making maps