I won't judge you on the fact that you're gay, not at all.
However I will judge you on the fact that you're supposedly a native of the UK, and don't know how to spell words like "particularly".
Actually, overall your grammar is comparable to that of a 7 year old. Let's dissect it!
What are you guys' thoughts on LGBT stuff.
Actually correct use of an apostrophe. Good job :D However, missing question mark makes you lose points.
See, Gen Numbnuts, I've written something Felinism is pro-LGBT rights, caninism is against it.
I can excuse the obvious logical fallacy here and how your "Felinism is pro-LGBT rights and since we hate Caninism they must be against it!" statement is completely illogical.
But what I can't excuse the random assortment of words that you try to form into a sentence. Let's read that again, "I've written something Felinism is pro-LGBT rights, caninism is against it". While a semi-colon can replace that comma, what is actually inexcusable is the "something Felinism" part. How did that make any sense in your head? They are just words!
PS I am gay.
While it might look like there are no flaws to begin with, this sentence is excruciating. Firstly, it is not natural at all. In a conversation (or a written paragraph), you wouldn't drop a random "HEY I'M GAY" as a whole other sentence between the two main points in your paragraph. Additionally, the "PS" is absolutely unnecessary. Moreover, there's absolutely no comma to make the sentence make sense alone. "PS, I am gay" would be the more acceptable form of this monstrosity.
Judge me as you will.
This would look a lot better as "Judge me, as you will.", but clearly, you hate commas. Don't forget the fact that this is a completely unnatural way to talk in English (maybe it would be acceptable in the 1800s). "Judge me as you will". Repeat that. Now repeat it without
that 60 year old, posh English man voice in your head. You can't? That's what I thought. In no dialect is this form of making sentences actually common, and you sound like a spastic by saying "as you will" instead of "if you want". "Judge me if you want to" / "I don't care if you judge me" are far better alternatives to the abortion of semantics that this "sentence" is.
I don't piticularly give a damn, bitches.
Obviously there's the spelling at flaw here, but otherwise, this sentence looks alright. An exclamation mark could be used to actually express some emotion since clearly OP is quite triggered, but that's irrelevant. I want to touch on the fact that OP's sentences have been so short. Is idontlikecaninism disabled? I hope he isn't, because that would be mean of me to be so harsh to him, then.
If you are homophobic, I recommend you shoot yourself.
The first phrase in this sentence was going so well! It's such a shame that he fucked it up in the latter part of it. "I recommend that
you shoot yourself" would make you sound like a native speaker, and not a monkey with Parkinson's slamming his wrists on the keyboard.
Oh also, for such a topic praised by liberals like LGBT, idontlikecaninism is very clearly quite authoritarian, in this way:
"YOU ARE A CANINIST SO YOU ARE DUMB."
"IF YOU HAVE A DIFFERENT OPINION THAN ME YOU SHOULD SHOOT YOURSELF."
"I AM TOO PERSISTENT. WAAAAAAAAAAAAH!"
Anyway, that was enough making fun of this piticular
accident. It's a shame Miss Carriage doesn't always come when the downies are in the womb.
Edited 9/14/2016 19:40:11