You never want to make your map to overwhelming, and i think this one is.
My advice for anyone making multiple floors of a building is to draw a 3D version of the building to the side, and draw a line to each floor so people understand spatially. I had no clue this was a multi-floored building until i read your piece about it.
Feed back for my second attempt please!: 4/13/2015 02:40:15
I changed the map to better explain a few of the areas. The whole map is 900 px by 900 px so not sure why it looks small. As for the background it's what I threw in there so if I could get actual feedback instead of comments on the website I used I would appreciate it.
Feed back for my second attempt please!: 4/13/2015 02:41:24