| cought cheat: 2019-12-19 05:28:47 | 
        
        
            
                 
                
                      
                
                   
                Horrid Henry
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                    I agree
                    
                 
                
                
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            | cought cheat: 2019-12-19 05:43:54 | 
        
        
            
                 
                
                      
                
                riskboy88  
                
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                    ?
                    
                 
                
                
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            | cought cheat: 2019-12-19 05:44:47 | 
        
        
            
                 
                
                      
                
                   
                Horrid Henry
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                    He makes a valid point with the 6th line of his 9th paragraph.
                    
                 
                
                
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            | cought cheat: 2019-12-19 05:45:06 | 
        
        
            
                 
                
                      
                
                riskboy88  
                
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                    thats an empty post right
                    
                 
                
                
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            | cought cheat: 2019-12-19 05:47:04 | 
        
        
            
                 
                
                      
                
                   
                Horrid Henry
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                    Kind of, cause it lost all meaning when he used the 6th letter capital before the 9th line and didn't even use a comma.
                    
                 
                
                
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            | cought cheat: 2019-12-19 05:47:33 | 
        
        
            
                 
                
                      
                
                riskboy88  
                
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                    what? all i see is a blank post, no words
                    
                 
                
                
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            | cought cheat: 2019-12-19 05:54:47 | 
        
        
            
                 
                
                      
                
                   
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                    To be fair with what he said, he lost all meaning to me too. Some things dont even make sense, especially the 69th sentence.
                    
                 
                
                
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            | cought cheat: 2019-12-19 20:14:56 | 
        
        
            
                 
                
                      
                
                Dullahan
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                    This rocked me to the core. I can't help but agree.
                    
                 
                
                
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            | cought cheat: 2019-12-20 07:58:33 | 
        
        
            
                 
                
                      
                
                   
                Master Shredtail
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                    get this to the press asap
                    
                 
                
                
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            | cought cheat: 2019-12-22 18:04:59 | 
        
        
            
                 
                
                Japanball
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                    Wtf Surgeon that's so racist oml.
  But I stan the caesura in the 5th paragraph.
                    
                 
                
                
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            | cought cheat: 2019-12-28 04:29:07 | 
        
        
            
                 
                
                      
                
                Captain MAK Sparrow
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                    I liked the last paragraph and how it talked about how we should all be happy and stuff.  But I agree with LF100 that the lack of a comma rly ruined the entire first paragraph.
                     
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            | cought cheat: 2019-12-28 20:29:26 | 
        
        
            
                 
                
                      
                
                Pyotr Krasnov
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                    i'll have to disagree with that last part, im never getting off my rear end to do anything, downvoted.
                    
                 
                
                
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            | cought cheat: 2020-01-02 11:06:37 | 
        
        
            
                 
                
                Japanball
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                    You guys just aren't vibing with it. Can't you understand the imagery and anaphora in the seventh stanza?
                    
                 
                
                
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