| cought cheat: 2019-12-19 05:28:47 |
Horrid Henry
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I agree
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| cought cheat: 2019-12-19 05:43:54 |
riskboy88 
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?
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| cought cheat: 2019-12-19 05:44:47 |
Horrid Henry
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He makes a valid point with the 6th line of his 9th paragraph.
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| cought cheat: 2019-12-19 05:45:06 |
riskboy88
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thats an empty post right
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| cought cheat: 2019-12-19 05:47:04 |
Horrid Henry
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Kind of, cause it lost all meaning when he used the 6th letter capital before the 9th line and didn't even use a comma.
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| cought cheat: 2019-12-19 05:47:33 |
riskboy88
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what? all i see is a blank post, no words
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| cought cheat: 2019-12-19 05:54:47 |
Horrid Henry
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To be fair with what he said, he lost all meaning to me too. Some things dont even make sense, especially the 69th sentence.
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| cought cheat: 2019-12-19 20:14:56 |
Dullahan
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This rocked me to the core. I can't help but agree.
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| cought cheat: 2019-12-20 07:58:33 |
Master Shredtail
Level 58
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get this to the press asap
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| cought cheat: 2019-12-22 18:04:59 |
Japanball
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Wtf Surgeon that's so racist oml.
But I stan the caesura in the 5th paragraph.
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| cought cheat: 2019-12-28 04:29:07 |
Captain MAK Sparrow
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I liked the last paragraph and how it talked about how we should all be happy and stuff. But I agree with LF100 that the lack of a comma rly ruined the entire first paragraph.
Edited 12/28/2019 04:29:58
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| cought cheat: 2019-12-28 20:29:26 |
Pyotr Krasnov
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i'll have to disagree with that last part, im never getting off my rear end to do anything, downvoted.
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| cought cheat: 2020-01-02 11:06:37 |
Japanball
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You guys just aren't vibing with it. Can't you understand the imagery and anaphora in the seventh stanza?
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