Name Abbandoned Village -> Abandoned Village (in Fortree Margraviate)
There are 2 ways I interpret the "clean territory borders" comment by Ranek 1. Around the circular territories and some other territories, the border looks... ugly and strange 2. When different bonuses touch, one covers up the other (but that is a major fix and pretty much impossible to do without restarting from what I've seen)
clean borders are simple to maintain. just make sure that your territories don't overlap, they can share the same border, which is even most pleasing for the eyes, in my opinion. Adjacent territories from different bonuses should be separated. Best here are two border lines, which neither overlap nor have a gap in between. You will still have enough gaps and ugly connections due to conversion problems with warlight, so I recommend more accuracy.
Pacifidlog is put as east of the Sky Pillar and Crescent Island. It's the opposite; (Town)-(Pillar)-(Island)
Also, damn, the map is interestingly complete and unique, but I feel like you missed the opportunity of shoving in the Sevii Islands that are accessible in Hoenn (birth island and navel rock) as well as Faraway and Southern Islands.