You map looks like it's progressing good. However there are a few issues that u should look into.
From what i see few territories (Eppertshausen, Zwingenberg, Hirzenhain, Wahlsburg, Waluff) seem too small to fit the number of armies. There is a button in the map editor "show example armies" that shows two digit armies so try it. If u are aware of this and already checked, then i'm talking nonsense are just ignore the post :D
I would try to avoid cross connections like the one between Gelnhausen, Linsengericht, Freigericht, Hasselroth because they look confusing as to what connects to what.
Territories like Bad Soden Salmunster, Steinau, Gutsbezirk Reinhardswald, Hofgeismar are split in two but in a very confusing way maybe u should try to make this simpler.
The Bonuses are too big in my opinion and u should try to make them smaller. Maybe divide every district in north and south or something like that and then make the whole district a superbonus (bonuses bigger than 7-8 territories are very hard to take and disrupt gameplay). The basic rule i use when choosing bonus size is territories -1 is the bonus size(5 territories = bonus of 4) and for superbonuses i divide by 5 or 4.
Try to look at this threads
about how to make you lines smoother and division between them better
Well that's it from first look :D
Keep up the good work.