I have to say it doesn't look great, here's some things you need to pick up on:
- dimentions of map way too big for its size
- rediculously low number of territories (aim for above 75)
- sloppy artwork
- all the territory borders are very jagged
- there is inconsistent empty space between connecting territories
To be frank it isn't going to get a higher rating than 2.5/5, if it does get published at all.
Here are some resources that should help you make a better map, also look at other people's maps that have been rated well for inspiration.
If you were to make a new version with more territories, you could use a random name generator to come up with territory names, this one might be useful in your case: http://www.fantasynamegenerators.com/east-european-town-names.php#.WSLRamgrI2w
Edited 5/22/2017 11:56:00