There are some interesting connections and bonuses, and I enjoyed playing it.
Aesthetically, however, this map leaves a lot to be desired. The font used is ugly, and every label other than "ABC SEA" is stretched vertically. The territories float with large rivers of black between them.
The territories are well-shaped and connected. The bonuses need substantial improvement. I recommend dividing up the larger bonuses - maybe 4-8 territories per bonus area. You can always include super bonuses if you want, as well. I like when the number of armies provided by a bonus is equal to about 60% - 75% of the number of territories in the bonus.