This map is beautiful nor playable. The bonuses are either too large or too small, and given few armies. The territories themselves have ugly borders, with many gaps and overlap. You should really put more effort into your map next time if you want people to enjoy it.
This map is definitely below the standards for Warlight quality, and frankly I'm somewhat surprised that it passed the necessary inspection before going public. Many things need to be adjusted and fixed in order for this map to be both playable and aesthetically pleasing. I am in the process of writing a guide to mapmaking that I definitely think you should look at once it is completed. Also, if you would like, I would also be willing to smooth out some of the problems with the map as I feel it has potential, but definitely has not been well-executed.