This map suffers from the same problem every "novelty" map does: it is a collection of random territories. The player doesn't get a feel of conquering any grand piece of geography (real or fictional). The one saving grace for novelty maps is artwork; art will always be appreciated. However, the artwork in this map is half-assed and it's clear this map was traced over someone else's work. And the proportions are all wrong.
A lot is going on in this map visually, and and all of it feels incomplete the background/ art looks rushed through, and there are so many arrows pointing in different directions it took a little bit to figure out were each one was really going, I love the idea and the thought it just needs a little fine tuning and then it will be amazing.
Very cool map. Lots of fun. Please update though and create bonuses for the areas without them so that they have a purpose for being attacked. Also, it is easy to land lock units. Perhaps consider a few more connection points. Great effort... so much detail.