A lot is going on in this map visually, and and all of it feels incomplete the background/ art looks rushed through, and there are so many arrows pointing in different directions it took a little bit to figure out were each one was really going, I love the idea and the thought it just needs a little fine tuning and then it will be amazing.
This map suffers from the same problem every "novelty" map does: it is a collection of random territories. The player doesn't get a feel of conquering any grand piece of geography (real or fictional). The one saving grace for novelty maps is artwork; art will always be appreciated. However, the artwork in this map is half-assed and it's clear this map was traced over someone else's work. And the proportions are all wrong.
Very cool map. Lots of fun. Please update though and create bonuses for the areas without them so that they have a purpose for being attacked. Also, it is easy to land lock units. Perhaps consider a few more connection points. Great effort... so much detail.