This map was fun until i found out that you stacked two territories, La Olivia is under La Olivia. the period is part of the name that is how i figures it out. and after having to chase enemy units halfway through my territory, either fix it or make it more apparent that there is another territory.
Too much choke points, blockade cards would need to be broken through to win. I think this map shall add some ocean provinces or sea provinces to remove some choke points. Or maybe add more connections between islands.
Some territories border too much other territories for example La Orotava in Tenerife. It borders 14 territories when Valle Gran Rey in La Gomera only borders one. Same applies to the territory El Paso. It borders 12 territories which is almost all the territories on that island. I suggest the map maker break these territories into smaller territories.
Also, the bonuses are also problems. Zona Norte, the bonus of 15 territories for 13 armies per turn on the island of Tenerife has too much territories to conquer to get that bonus. Easy to break. Zona Sur on the island of Tenerife also has a 12 territories to conquer to get that bonus. La Palma (the island) is also a problem. I suggest the map maker create more bonuses with smaller territories so that the bonuses are not that easy to break.