This was my first map and has been modified and published several times. I finally decided to completely revamp the entire thing and add some details that I felt like were missing, in the interest of ecompassing the essense of the actual game itself. It now has all the temples and cities and Sin incorporated, as well as a better balance from bonus to bonus, and better mobility.
You Forgot to add the connecting line between Macelania Island and East omega Ruins 3. In any case, you did a fairly decent job with your first map. The size of some of the bonuses are a little large for my taste, especially considering the size of the map, and it has a balance issue which causes it to favor the south (higher ratio of smaller bonuses), but in any case, congratulations on your first map!