I like this map, generally. The main issues it has are (1) improper connections (and lack of connections) and (2) difficulty in distinguishing where territories begin and end.
Connection issues: - Francja Poludniowa should connect to Polonia Zachodnia - Maribor should not connect to Elsyonor - Ciuad de Bravo should connect to Wrote Precelkhandy - Czerwinsk should connect to Pieciopolska Wschodnia - I saw a couple of other missing connections, but cannot locate them now.
As for the second issue, I recommend making sure that lines connecting territories connect to the part of territory where the number of armies appears. For instance, the line from Valhalla to Czerwinsk should not connect to the little island southwest of the main portion of Czerwinsk - it's too confusing. Bialagora has similar issues, as do Melena and Cyberia i Wyspy Solardyjskie, as well as Wyspy Azteckie.
Map was drawn attractively. However there are several spots where the links don't match the drawing -- instances where a link is drawn, but doesn't exist, and instances where a link exists but is not drawn.