I wrote that haiku only a month ago and even after re-skimming the thread, I have no idea what I meant by it.

I can remember writing it; I deliberated over a preposition, but I knew I had a hit, what with the rhyme, the appropriation of a semi-cliché, and the phrase "tangled mind" which I was slightly pleased by. There were definitely multiple layers of meaning in there too, but I'm struggling to identify even one of them.

It's killing me, I can't even tell whether it's a comment on piggy, aranka, myself, or all three concurrently. There's a reason I capitalised the last line and not the middle one, what was it?

From writing this comment and re-reading it, I understood it, I think. It took like 15 minutes though.

Maybe you could glean even more from your poem by explaining its meaning to us.

same problem here, auto games does not always show, but when I click refresh it usually solves it.

I can't in good conscience do that, piggy. http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Intentional_Fallacy#New_Criticism

Anyway, if the seventeen syllables weren't enough to convey the concepts, then it wasn't a very good haiku, I guess.

What if i considered your explanation an extension of the piece?

Then you would be Objectively Wrong, cake boss. Don't worry though buddy, the poem isn't too harsh on you, don't worry about it. Check this out though

ZANE LOWE

http://pitchfork.com/reviews/tracks/14177-it-was-u/

R-R-RADIO ONE, ZANE LOWE LOWE LOWE LOWE

http://pitchfork.com/reviews/tracks/11961-decisions/

ZANE LOWE IN NEW MUSIC WE TRUST [i dont know if they say that any more]

http://pitchfork.com/reviews/tracks/11845-sleep-paralysist/

i remember chillwave back when it was glo-fi [wait that doesn't sound like a zane lowe thing to say] ... bro [saved it]

[IRRITATING ADVERT FOR SOME YOUTH-ORIENTATED SHOW ON RADIO ONE AT LIKE 1030 ON A TUESDAY I DON'T KNOW WHO EVEN LISTENS AT THAT TIME (UNLESS THERE IS LITERALLY NOTHING ELSE ON BUT THEN WHY HAVE AN ADVERT FOR IT?) AND APPROPRIATELY THE SHOW THEY'RE ADVERTISING SOUNDS DIRE]

http://pitchfork.com/reviews/tracks/11455-feel-it-all-around/

[APPALLING JOKE]

Z-Z-Z-Z-ZAAAAANE LOOOOWE

http://pitchfork.com/reviews/tracks/15394-casino-lisboa/


I tried to emulate the form in which you normally listen to music so that you might be able to appreciate these more. Try reading this post out loud while you play the music.

I have been reading pitchfork for nearly four years.

Haha, I knew you listened. 3rd and 4th were both very cool.

I like the first one best, that guy is so great. I thought he was somewhere between Abel Tesfaye, Jessie Ware and James Blake so I thought you would go for him.

Would it be too much to ask you to have this talk of yours in private instead of derailing most of the threads on this forum?

Sorry, what more can you add to this thread beyond the title? If anything, we're doing the thread a service by bumping it so much. It's not exactly like there's some interesting discussion going on that we're ruining.

Also, um, "most of the threads"? Greatest exaggeration in the history of humanity.

Anyway, not my fault that he doesn't go on skype.

ALSO also: jealous.

have this talk of yours in private instead of derailing most of the threads on this forum

Hypocritically your comment is not on topic.